Which editing choice improves transitions between sentences in a paragraph?

• A. Using repeated phrases to reinforce ideas.
• B. Using a transitional phrase to link ideas.
• C. Introducing new topics without connections.
• D. Removing all transition words.

Answer: (B)

Transitions that link ideas between sentences create flow and coherence in a paragraph. When you start a new sentence with a transitional phrase, you signal how this sentence relates to what came before—adding information, showing contrast, indicating cause and effect, or outlining steps. That helps readers follow your argument or description without misreading. The best choice uses a transitional phrase to connect ideas, making the link explicit and keeping the paragraph unified. For example: “The study found a significant effect. In addition, the results held across all groups.” Here, “In addition” shows the relationship of the second sentence to the first, guiding the reader smoothly. Repeating phrases can feel redundant and doesn’t establish a new connection; introducing a new topic without connections breaks coherence; removing transition words leaves sentences that seem disjointed.